Revision Guide

Double-Check the Content

(Make sure you have written sentences that correspond to each section of your outline)
  1. Beginning
    • Reach out to your audience (engaging hook)
    • Prepare your audience (relevant background)
    • Preview your argument (interrelated stages)
    • Thesis statement (topic and position)
  2. Middle (look at each paragraph)
    • Topic sentence (main idea of paragraph)
    • Supporting details (concrete evidence)
    • Closing statement (demonstrate proof)
  3. Ending
    • Explain importance (why thesis matters)
    • New information (extend the discussion)
    • Final comments (satisfy the reader)
  4. Counter-argument paragraph (if used)
    • Statement of the opinion that differs from yours.
    • How or why this opinion makes sense.
    • Rebuttal of this opinion.
Double-Check the Organization
  1. Put a * by your thesis, each topic sentence in the middle, and the first sentence of the end.
  2. The logical progression of these sentences should be an orderly thought process.
  3. Make sure your thesis clearly and directly focuses your topic and states your position.
  4. Make sure your stages are not three unrelated ideas but sequential steps in ONE argument.
  5. Make sure the last sentence of each middle paragraph DOES NOT bring up the topic of the next paragraph.
  6. From beginning to end, your essay should be persuasive, not a summary of events or facts.
  7. Make sure that each of your paragraphs is the same length.
Write a two-part title to catch attention and be informative
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  • Telling the Boss Off: How I Learned to Stand Up to a Tyrant
  • Lower Test Scores: How No Child Left Behind Leaves Every Child Behind
  • Turning Our Backs on Spirit: A Defense of Senior Class Disrespect
  • Let them Fight to the End: An Alternative to Our Present Form of Capital Punishment
  • Keep Them Off the Roads: How to Improve DUI Law Enforcement