Peer Responses for AB

You know the basic guidelines for writing Peer Responses, but for this assignment, you have to approach commenting a little differently. Even if your classmate has done more than two commentaries, please focus only on the first two. Each commentary should have two equal length paragraphs, so you should comment on each one. Leave one comment on the first paragraph and two comments on the second paragraph, for a total of six comments over the two commentaries. When leaving comments, remember the requirements for the commentary paragraphs:
  1. The first paragraph should identify ONE idea in the source (some point the author makes) that pertains to your research question. Explain this idea as the author presents it using additional examples from the article.
  2. The second paragraph should explain how that idea points to an important factor that the debaters should consider. How does the author's idea help that group of people think more carefully about the question, without actually answering the question? What does this idea contribute to a discussion of the question you raised? Remember, the writer is not the debater and should not be trying to argue a position or answer the question.
As usual, in your 300-word letter to your peer, highlight 2-3 specific ways to improve the draft. Do not waste words simply pointing out what you liked.

AB Topic Workshop

Your Annotated Bibliography topic will include your finished research question and a 300-word explanation.

When you review your peers' AB topics, focus on these criteria:
  1. how they arrived at their question (personal significance, how they narrowed it down, etc.)

    Announce the research question between 1 and 2.

  2. why the question matters (not to them personally, but why it is significant to the target audience)
  3. what they expect/hope to find in their search for sources (they have to speculate about the factors they might discover).
    When you write your introduction for the rough draft AB, this third part will highlight what you ACTUALLY DID find in your sources.

Peer Responses for Paper 2

You know the basic guidelines for writing Peer Responses, but for this paper, I would like you to focus on quality of communication in your peers' essays. To do so, please identify sentences where the writer is too general instead of focusing on first-hand experience. When you revise your own essay later, general sentences must be removed from your paper and replaced with real details from your first-hand experience. Also, I would like you to look at the following specific spots of the paper to make sure the writer is effectively presenting the ideas:
  1. The first sentence of the paragraph(s) in the beginning: Does it generalize or does it give us specific information to help the audience start thinking right away?
  2. The thesis statement at the end of the beginning: Does make a claim ABOUT the first-hand experience, or just announce the general opinion of the writer?
  3. The first sentence of each stage paragraph (known as a topic sentence): The topic sentence must tell us the ONE point that the paragraph will discuss, not just be an event in a story.
  4. The first sentence of the ending paragaph: Even though the temptation to generalize wiil be strong at the end of the essay, make sure the writer starts off with a NEW idea that extends the previous discussion.

Paper Topics

When you write a paper topic, you are writing a report about your plan for an essay, not the essay itself. To write this report, you need to be upfront about a few major elements of your topic:
  1. The specific idea from the article that has inspired your own discussion
  2. The one particular experience, question, or problem that you will develop based on your first-hand experience
  3. The stages (logical steps to lead your reader) that you will put in the middle part of your essay to elaborate on your idea
  4. Your thesis statement and the relevance of discussing that thesis

So, your Paper Topic should include four components, in this order, all in one paragraph (at least 300 words):

1. Introduce the specific idea from the article you chose

You may not use a general idea to start your topic, nor should you summarize the article or use the "main point" of the article. Your topic should be be inspired by an idea from the reading assignment and clearly show your intent to take the idea in a new direction according to your own concerns.

2. Focus on ONE particular experience, question, or problem that you can base on first-hand experience

Your essay cannot be "about the article," or about several different ideas. If you want to analyze an experience, you should look at a single incident. If you want to look at a consequence of, reason for, or improvement to a problem, you must look at a single consequence, single reason, etc.

3. Announce and explain the stages that will develop your central idea in a logical sequence, not a list of separate ideas

This part should take up the most space in your report because you have to explain each stage, not just announce it. The ultimate goal of your paper is to extend an idea from an article with a discussion of your own. Whatever that topic is, and there is a lot of room for different kinds of topics, the discussion has to lead the reader through a sequence of stages. Instead of summarizing the article or giving a list of examples, you will fashion a complex discussion. Each middle paragraph builds on the one before.

4. Indicate a possible thesis and the relevance of discussing that thesis

The thesis statement has to give a reason for some idea that you think is true--just be sure that your thesis is about your particular topic, not a general conclusion. For relevance, explain why your topic matters. Even if your topic is well-developed, its importance will not automatically be clear, so make sure you offer a reason that the paper topic will be worth reading. The relevance of a topic could come from any direction, but it needs to be openly stated in this report so that the benefit to your audience is well-defined.

First Day

Welcome to your English 1101 course! I hope this semester will be both fun and challenging for you! Your professor's name is Dr. Matthew Horton (that's me!), but you can call him Dr. H. I have high hopes that this semester will help you improve your skills as a college-level writer!

Click on these icons and see what you can do! This course is about writing, sure, but it is also about using technology to help you discover new possibilities with writing. Writing's not all just about typing papers and turning them in. In fact, this course strives to be as PAPERLESS as possible! This might be a little scary for some of you, but I assure you, the skills you'll learn will be just as important as effective writing!



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